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Cosmic-chronometer, supernova, and BAO data allow the undeformed expansion history: the fitted GUP coefficient β* = −0.086 has a 95% credible interval that includes zero.

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arxiv 2607.25745 v1 pith:KVUEUL3Z submitted 2026-07-28 gr-qc hep-th

Late-Time Cosmological Tests of a Minisuperspace Generalized-Uncertainty-Principle Deformation

G.G.L. Nashed This is my paper
classification gr-qc hep-th PACS 04.60.-m98.80.-k04.20.-q
keywords generalized uncertainty principleminisuperspacemodified Friedmann equationcosmic chronometersPantheon+DESI baryon acoustic oscillationscosmological parameter constraintsΛCDM comparison
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The paper asks whether a quantum-gravity correction to the Heisenberg uncertainty relation, implemented as a quadratic deformation of the FLRW minisuperspace Poisson algebra, shows up in the late-time expansion history. It derives a modified Friedmann equation and fits its deformation parameter β* to cosmic chronometers, Pantheon+ supernovae, and DESI DR2 BAO data, treating the sound horizon as free. The baseline fit mildly prefers a negative β* and improves the chi-square by about 4.7 over flat ΛCDM, but the 95% credible interval, −0.142 < β* < 0.005, still contains the standard zero-deformation limit. The paper's main message is that the apparent preference for a nonzero deformation is not robust: changing the normalization prescription or tightening the perturbative cutoff shifts the median and often returns intervals that comfortably include zero. A negative β* also does not correspond to the conventional minimum-length GUP, whose coefficient is positive.

Core claim

The paper establishes a modified Friedmann equation E²(a) = X(a) + β* a⁴ X²(a) from a quadratic GUP deformation, and uses background (distance and Hubble) data to constrain the dimensionless deformation β*. Its central numerical result is β* = −0.086 with a 68% credibility interval of +0.040/−0.032 and a 95% interval of −0.142 < β* < 0.005, so the undeformed limit remains allowed. The Bayesian information criterion favors ΛCDM, and the posterior preference for negative β* disappears or weakens once the perturbative cutoff is tightened from η_max < 0.10 to η_max < 0.05, or once a strict order-by-order normalization is used. The paper therefore concludes that the data do not establish a nonzer

What carries the argument

The central object is the first-order GUP-deformed Friedmann equation, E²(a) = X(a) + β* a⁴ X²(a), with β* = 3βρc0/(πG). The analysis hinges on how the truncated equation is normalized at the present epoch: the baseline 'exact-root' prescription, Eq. (16), solves 1 = X0 + β* X0² algebraically and contains O(β*²) terms, while the alternative 'strict order-by-order' prescription, Eq. (19), removes such terms. The perturbative validity measure η_max = max[½|β*|(1+z)^−4 X(z)] over the fitted redshift range acts as a hand-chosen cutoff (0.10 baseline; 0.05 conservative). These two choices determine what number is quoted for β*, which is why the paper stresses that the constraint is convention-dep

Load-bearing premise

The numerical constraint on β* is load-bearing on the baseline exact-root normalization (Eq. 16) and the hand-picked perturbative cutoff η_max < 0.10; changing either shifts the central value and can move the 95% interval to include zero.

What would settle it

Fit the untruncated expansion law E² = X[1 + (β*/2)a⁴ X]² with its own normalization 1 = X0[1 + (β*/2)X0]² to the same CC+Pantheon++DESI data; if the resulting 95% interval on β* excludes zero for all reasonable cutoffs, the paper's 'preference is not robust' conclusion would be contradicted.

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If this is right

  • If β* is exactly zero, the model reduces to flat ΛCDM, so the data allow standard cosmology unchanged.
  • The mild improvement in chi-square (Δχ² = −4.687) is not enough to overcome the BIC preference for fewer parameters.
  • Any future claim of a GUP detection in the background expansion must specify the normalization and perturbative cutoff, since both change the inferred interval.
  • The negative fitted branch cannot be interpreted as evidence for a minimum-length GUP, whose quadratic coefficient is positive.
  • A covariant formulation that fixes the perturbation equations and the sound horizon is required before CMB, lensing, and growth data can be used to constrain this construction.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the sound horizon were tied to a model rather than treated as a free nuisance parameter, the β* posterior could shift substantially; the current treatment may hide a nonzero signal behind that degeneracy.
  • Because the correction is constant during radiation domination and decays toward the past in matter domination, early-universe probes are likely less sensitive to this deformation than late-time background data.
  • A proper all-orders analysis of the full square model of Eq. (13) with its own normalization could decide whether the negative preference is an artifact of truncation, independent of the first-order conventions tested here.
  • The same combined likelihood could be applied to other modified Friedmann equations to compare which deformation, if any, is actually preferred by late-time data.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

3 major / 4 minor

Summary. The paper studies a quadratic GUP deformation of the flat FLRW minisuperspace Poisson algebra, {a, pa} = 1 + β pa², and derives the first-order modified Friedmann equation E²(a) = X(a) + β* a⁴ X²(a), Eq. (11). Using 31 cosmic chronometers, the uncalibrated 1580-object Pantheon+ sample, and the 13-component DESI DR2 BAO likelihood, with rd and MB treated as free nuisance parameters, it compares the resulting background against flat ΛCDM and CPL. The baseline constraint is β* = −0.086^{+0.040}_{−0.032} (68%) and [−0.142, 0.005] (95%), so the undeformed limit is nominally allowed. The paper also reports cosmographic quantities q0, j0, ztr, model-comparison statistics, and an extensive sensitivity analysis showing that both the normalization prescription (exact-root vs. strict first order) and the perturbative cutoff ηmax change the constraint substantially.

Significance. If taken at face value, the paper is a careful, honest null-result study: it shows that a particular GUP deformation is not robustly preferred by late-time background data. Its strengths are real: the algebra through Eq. (11) checks out; the likelihood treatment is standard and carefully implemented with Cholesky factorization and sampling diagnostics; the paper explicitly flags that the minisuperspace model does not determine a perturbation sector and that rd must remain a free nuisance; and Table IV transparently exposes the dependence on normalization and cutoff. The broader conclusion that the preference for a nonzero β* is not robust is credible and well supported. However, the headline numerical constraint and the associated 'undeformed limit remains allowed' statement are conditional on the exact-root normalization, so the significance of any specific β* value is limited.

major comments (3)
  1. [Abstract; §VI, Table IV; Eq. (16) vs. Eq. (19)] The statement that 'the undeformed limit remains allowed' is not robust across the two normalization prescriptions presented in the paper. Under the strict order-by-order normalization of Eq. (19) with the same broad cutoff ηmax < 0.10, Table IV gives β* = −0.119^{+0.055}_{−0.048} and a 95% interval [−0.194, −0.010], which excludes β* = 0. The baseline result [−0.142, 0.005] follows only from the exact-root normalization of Eq. (16). Because both normalizations are described as equally motivated, the abstract and Section VI should explicitly qualify 'allowed' as 'allowed under the exact-root normalization and ηmax < 0.10', or the fiducial result should be changed to the strict first-order normalization. As written, a reader may quote the baseline interval as a model-independent bound, which the paper's own analysis contradicts.
  2. [§II.B, Eq. (16)] The baseline normalization solves 1 = X0 + β* X0² exactly, so X0(β*) contains terms of order β*² and higher. This is formally inconsistent with keeping only first order in β when deriving Eq. (11). The strict normalization of Eq. (19) is the order-by-order consistent counterpart. Since the choice between these two prescriptions changes whether β* = 0 is excluded at 95% credibility, the paper needs a stronger justification for why the exact-root prescription is the baseline, or it should present Eq. (19) as the fiducial first-order analysis and Eq. (16) as a sensitivity test. Without this, the central numerical claim remains convention-dependent at a level that matters for the headline result.
  3. [§VII, Table IV, ηmax<0.05 rows] The conclusion that 'the preference for a nonzero deformation is not robust' is partly based on the ηmax < 0.05 cuts, which retain only 54.7% (exact-root) and 36.1% (strict) of the corresponding broad-prior chains. This is a legitimate nested filtering exercise, but it means the conservative intervals are conditional on a subregion of parameter space in which the first-order expansion is best controlled. The paper should state more clearly whether, under the broad ηmax < 0.10 criterion, the first-order model can be considered valid at all if large fractions of the posterior violate ηmax < 0.05. This affects the interpretation of both the 'allowed' and 'excluded' statements and should be made explicit in the conclusions.
minor comments (4)
  1. [Author affiliation] Typo: 'South Affrica' should be 'South Africa'.
  2. [Figure citations] Several figures (Figs. 1, 2, and 4) do not appear to be explicitly cited in the text; please add in-text references at the appropriate places.
  3. [§VIII, Eq. (49)] The quantity Ωeff_GUP(z) is negative for the preferred β* < 0 branch. The text already notes this is a bookkeeping quantity, but a short explicit comment that this does not represent a negative energy density of a physical fluid would help avoid misreading.
  4. [§VI, Table III] The statement that the BIC 'favors' ΛCDM is based on ΔBIC = 2.705, which is positive but modest. Consider describing this as 'weakly favors' to match the language used for the AIC comparison.

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity: beta* is a fitted parameter and the modified Friedmann equation follows algebraically from the assumed bracket, independent of the data.

full rationale

The paper's derivation chain is self-contained rather than circular. Equation (11), E^2(a)=X(a)+beta* a^4 X^2(a), is obtained algebraically from the assumed minisuperspace deformation {a,p_a}=1+beta p_a^2 via Hamilton's equation and the Hamiltonian constraint; it is not an output that was designed to reproduce the data. The deformation parameter beta* is then constrained by CC, Pantheon+, and DESI DR2 data, i.e., it is an estimated parameter, not a prediction. The cosmographic quantities q0, j0, and z_tr are posterior reparametrizations of the same fitted background, and the paper explicitly says: "None of these quantities is an independent observable, but together they display where the fitted background differs from its undeformed counterpart." The sensitivity of the headline interval to the normalization prescription (Eq. 16 vs Eq. 19) and to the perturbative cutoff eta_max is a disclosed robustness limitation, not a circular reduction: the strict order-by-order model is a separately defined prescription fitted on its own, and Table IV explicitly reports both chains. No load-bearing self-citation is present; the cited external works provide context (GUP, BAO, CMB) but are not used to force the model's conclusions. Therefore the paper contains no step in which a claimed prediction reduces by construction to its inputs.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

6 free parameters · 5 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central claim rests on an assumed deformed bracket, a first-order truncation with a hand-chosen cutoff, a background-only treatment with rd as a free nuisance, and a fiducial-cell convention. All of these are acknowledged in the text. No new particles, forces, or fields are introduced.

free parameters (6)
  • β* = -0.086 (baseline median; best fit -0.095)
    The GUP deformation parameter and central fitted quantity in Eq. (11).
  • H0 = 67.88 +1.67/-1.68 km/s/Mpc
    Hubble constant, jointly marginalized with MB and rd.
  • Ωm0 = 0.3072 +0.0082/-0.0079
    Matter density parameter.
  • rd = 147.05 +3.57/-3.32 Mpc
    Sound horizon treated as free nuisance because the model does not predict the perturbation sector.
  • MB = -19.413 ±0.051
    Supernova absolute magnitude, sampled jointly with H0.
  • ηmax validity cutoff = 0.10 baseline; 0.075 and 0.05 tested
    Hand-chosen perturbative cutoff that controls the posterior tail and changes the inferred interval.
axioms (5)
  • ad hoc to paper The quadratic GUP bracket {a, pa} = 1 + β p_a² (Eq. 6) is a valid effective minisuperspace description.
    The paper states that GUP motivation alone does not determine unique dynamics; this bracket is chosen, not derived from a UV theory.
  • domain assumption First-order truncation in β is sufficient under ηmax < 0.1.
    Eq. (13) displays the first omitted term; the cutoff is imposed in Eq. (38).
  • domain assumption Only background observables are used; perturbed-universe data (CMB, lensing, RSD, power spectrum) are excluded.
    Sec. I and III: the deformed algebra does not fix the perturbation sector, so rd is left free.
  • domain assumption Unit fiducial comoving cell and a0 = 1 convention.
    Sec. II.D: the inferred β is convention-specific and not a model-independent fundamental bound.
  • standard math The flat FLRW Hamiltonian constraint Eq. (4) remains valid under the deformation.
    Standard minisuperspace reduction used to obtain Eq. (5).

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The investigation of possible quantum-gravity effects in cosmology is of considerable interest, especially when such effects can be tested against observations of the late-time expansion. In the present work we study a quadratic generalized-uncertainty-principle (GUP) deformation of the FLRW minisuperspace Poisson algebra. At first order in the deformation parameter, the construction modifies the Friedmann equation and hence the homogeneous expansion history. Since it does not determine a unique perturbation sector, we restrict the analysis to background observables, using 31 cosmic-chronometer measurements, the uncalibrated 1580-object Pantheon$+$ Hubble-flow sample, and the 13-component DESI DR2 baryon-acoustic-oscillation likelihood, while treating the sound horizon as a nuisance parameter. We compare the resulting cosmology with flat \LCDM{} and with the Chevallier--Polarski--Linder parametrization. For the baseline normalization we obtain $\betastar=-0.086^{+0.040}_{-0.032}$ at $68\%$ credibility and $-0.142<\betastar<0.005$ at $95\%$ credibility.

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Figure 1. Figure 1: FIG. 1. Marginalized one- and two-dimensional posterior distributions for the GUP background model obtained from the [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: FIG. 3. Posterior medians and 68% credible bands for the fractional GUP correction (left), the fractional shift in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: FIG. 4. Posterior medians and [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p008_4.png] view at source ↗

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