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Post-recombination baryon accretion can turn the late three-body channel for primordial black-hole binaries into a major merger source, already constrained by LVK and potentially visible to TianQin at tiny abundances.

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load-bearing objection Clean coupling of BHL/PR accretion to late three-body rates that elevates a previously subdominant channel; the instantaneous z_cut-off idealization makes the numbers an upper envelope, not a robust forecast. the 2 major comments →

arxiv 2607.06737 v1 pith:O4O6MZYZ submitted 2026-07-07 astro-ph.CO astro-ph.HE

Effect of post-recombination accretion on primordial binary black hole mergers within virialized dark matter halos

A. Konovalov , K. Postnov This is my paper
classification astro-ph.CO astro-ph.HE
keywords primordial black holesbinary black hole mergerspost-recombination accretionBondi-Hoyle-LittletonPark-Ricottivirialized dark matter halosTianQinlate three-body channel
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Primordial black holes that later meet inside virialized dark-matter halos were thought to form binaries only rarely. This paper shows that baryon accretion after recombination can change that picture. By letting isolated PBHs grow in mass between recombination and the onset of halo virialization, the authors reshape both the mass function and the PBH fraction of dark matter. The late three-body capture channel, previously regarded as subdominant, is enhanced by many orders of magnitude under the efficient Bondi-Hoyle-Littleton accretion model. When virialization is delayed past redshift 10, the resulting merger rates already hit the ceiling set by existing LIGO-Virgo-KAGRA detections, forcing the initial PBH abundance to be extremely small. Even at abundances as low as one part in a million, the same enhanced rates remain high enough that the future space interferometer TianQin could register events, especially mergers with highly unequal component masses.

Core claim

Post-recombination baryon accretion, especially in the efficient Bondi-Hoyle-Littleton regime, strongly reshapes an initially log-normal PBH mass function and raises the late three-body merger rate inside virialized dark-matter halos enough that LVK observations already constrain the initial abundance for late virialization, while TianQin retains optimistic detection prospects even at f_i ~ 10^{-6}.

What carries the argument

The accretion-modified enhancement factors E_L2 and E_L3, which fold the growth of the mean mass and the reshaping of the mass function into the analytical late two- and three-body merger-rate formulae of Raidal et al., evaluated at a free virialization cut-off redshift.

Load-bearing premise

Accretion onto isolated PBHs and their later dynamical mergers inside halos can be treated as completely separate stages that end and begin at a single sharp redshift.

What would settle it

A joint calculation that allows accretion to continue while dark-matter halos gradually virialize, or a direct comparison of predicted asymmetric-mass-ratio merger rates against the mass-ratio distribution measured by LVK or TianQin.

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Referee Report

2 major / 4 minor

Summary. The paper studies how post-recombination baryon accretion onto isolated PBHs (via the Bondi–Hoyle–Littleton and Park–Ricotti models as efficiency extremes) reshapes an initial log-normal mass function and the PBH dark-matter fraction before virialized-halo formation. Using the late-channel two- and three-body merger-rate kernels of Raidal et al., it computes enhancement factors E_L2/E_L3, differential rates in total mass and mass ratio, LVK-derived upper bounds on the initial abundance f_i, and annual detection rates for TianQin. The central claim is that BHL accretion elevates the previously subdominant late three-body channel enough that LVK rates already constrain f_i for z_cut-off < 10 and that TianQin remains optimistic even at f_i ∼ 10^{-6}.

Significance. If the quantitative enhancements survive more realistic modeling of the accretion–merger transition, the work would elevate a channel long treated as negligible into a potentially observable population for both ground-based and space-based detectors, tightening abundance constraints and supplying distinctive mass-ratio signatures. Strengths include the clean Jacobian mapping of the mass function, the explicit comparison of two limiting accretion recipes, the derivation of parameter-free enhancement ratios E, and the concrete TianQin forecasts with SNR integration. These are falsifiable predictions that can be tested once space-based data arrive.

major comments (2)
  1. [Sec. 2.1, Eqs. 4.6–4.7, Discussion §6] Sec. 2.1 and Discussion §6: the entire numerical pipeline (mass-function reshaping, E_L2/E_L3 in Eqs. 4.6–4.7, LVK bounds in Fig. 7, and TianQin rates in Figs. 8–9) rests on the idealization that accretion terminates instantaneously for the whole population at a single free redshift z_cut-off ∈ {7,10,15}. Because BHL growth is highly non-linear (heavy tail → plateau, Fig. 1), a gradual virialization fraction would produce a milder average reshaping of ψ(M)ψ(η) and a substantially smaller E_L3. The paper correctly flags this as the leading uncertainty yet supplies no quantitative bound or time-dependent fraction; all quoted rates are therefore upper envelopes rather than realistic expectations. A minimal sensitivity study (e.g., a linear ramp of the virialized fraction) is required before the LVK/TianQin claims can be regarded as robust.
  2. [Sec. 6, Figs. 4–5] Sec. 6 and the BHL results of Figs. 4–5: the choice of the ROM08 velocity profile (versus the SPIK20 alternative also discussed) can change accretion rates by orders of magnitude, as the authors themselves note. Because the three-body enhancement E_L3 scales steeply with the high-mass tail, this unquantified systematic directly affects the claimed LVK constraints and the optimistic TianQin rates at f_i ∼ 10^{-6}. At least a one-parameter variation or an explicit statement that the quoted numbers are profile-dependent upper limits is needed.
minor comments (4)
  1. [Fig. 1] Fig. 1 caption and axis labels: the notation “I10/A10” etc. is never defined in the text; a short legend or expanded caption would help.
  2. [Sec. 2.2] Eq. (2.4) and surrounding text: the ionization fraction x_e is taken from ROM08 but never plotted or tabulated; a brief reference to the numerical values used would improve reproducibility.
  3. [Sec. 4, Figs. 5–9] Throughout Sec. 4: the fiducial f_ref values (10^{-6} for BHL, 10^{-3} for PR) are stated once; repeating them in the figure captions of Figs. 5–9 would avoid ambiguity when readers scale the rates.
  4. [Conclusion, figure captions] Typographical: “shapness” → “sharpness” (Conclusion); “countour” → “contour” (Figs. 2–3 captions).

Circularity Check

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Forward calculation from assumed log-normal MF + published accretion/merger kernels; LVK used only as external upper bound, no fitted-input-as-prediction or definitional loop.

full rationale

The paper's chain is: (i) adopt an initial log-normal mass function (Dolgov–Silk form, Eq. 3.1) with free parameters ⟨M⟩_i, γ and free abundance f_i; (ii) evolve isolated PBH masses under two published accretion recipes (BHL with Ricotti λ-factor, PR with ionization-front piecewise functions) down to a free cut-off redshift z_cut-off; (iii) insert the resulting ψ_z(m) and ⟨M⟩_z into the late-channel merger-rate kernels of Raidal et al. (Eqs. 4.1–4.2); (iv) form the enhancement ratios E_L2/E_L3 (Eqs. 4.6–4.7) and the absolute rates that are then compared with the external LVK upper envelope or folded through the TianQin SNR window. None of these steps is definitional of the output: the mass-function reshaping is a numerical solution of the accretion ODEs, the kernels are taken from an independent reference, and LVK enters solely as a hard upper limit that solves for the maximum allowed f_i (Eq. 4.10). Self-citations supply the preferred initial spectrum and earlier intermediate-mass forecasts but do not force the numerical values of E or the detectability claims. The instantaneous-separability idealization is a modeling assumption (flagged in §6), not a circular reduction. Hence the central quantitative results remain independent of their inputs.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

5 free parameters · 5 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central claim rests on a chain of standard cosmological and accretion assumptions plus several free parameters that control the size of the reported enhancement. No new physical entities are invented; the log-normal mass function and the two accretion models are taken from prior literature. The free parameters (especially z_cut-off, velocity profile, and sound-speed contrast) dominate the uncertainty budget and are acknowledged but not marginalized.

free parameters (5)
  • z_cut-off
    Treated as free discrete values {7,10,15}; controls available accretion time and dominates the enhancement factors (Sec. 2.1, Figs. 3–8).
  • initial mean mass <M>_i and sharpness γ
    Scanned over 10–30 M_⊙ and 0.6–1.5; set the shape of the initial log-normal (Sec. 3).
  • fiducial f_i (10^{-6} BHL, 10^{-3} PR)
    Reference abundances used for rate plots; later scaled linearly/cubically (Sec. 4).
  • sound-speed contrast c_in/c_s = 25
    Fixed by analogy with Scarcella et al.; Discussion notes order-of-magnitude sensitivity (Sec. 2.3).
  • halo parameters δ_eff, σ_v, γ_a
    Fixed to Raidal et al. values (105/107, 1 km s^{-1}, 2); γ_a variation can change rates by ~100 (Sec. 4.1, Discussion).
axioms (5)
  • ad hoc to paper Accretion and dynamical mergers are temporally separable; accretion ceases instantaneously at a single redshift z_cut-off.
    Stated in Sec. 2.1; enables independent calculation of mass growth then rates. Discussion acknowledges finite virialization timescale as a limitation.
  • domain assumption Initial PBH mass function is log-normal (Dolgov–Silk form) with parameters in the quoted ranges.
    Adopted from the Affleck–Dine baryogenesis scenario (Sec. 3); results are expected to be qualitatively similar for power-law tails.
  • domain assumption BHL and PR models bracket the range of post-recombination accretion efficiency.
    Taken from the review of Jangra et al. (Sec. 2); used as extreme cases throughout.
  • domain assumption Late two- and three-body merger-rate kernels of Raidal et al. remain valid after the mass function is reshaped by accretion.
    Eqs. 4.1–4.2 are used unchanged except for substitution of evolved ψ(m) and f_PBH.
  • domain assumption ROM08 velocity and ionization profiles correctly describe the relative PBH–gas motion.
    Chosen in Sec. 2.2; Discussion notes that the alternative SPIK20 profile can change accretion rates by orders of magnitude.

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Gravitational waves from binary black hole mergers remain among primary sources for ground-based and space laser interferometers. Primordial binary black holes (PBHs) can form binaries in the early Universe or at the matter-dominated stage in virialized dark matter halos at redshifts $z\sim 7-15$. We study enhancement of primordial binary PBH merger rate in virialized dark matter halos due to baryon accretion in the post-recombination epoch within two accretion models onto individual PBH -- Bondi-Hoyle-Littleton (BHL) and Park-Ricotti (PR), representing two extreme cases of the accretion efficiency. We calculate modification of the initial PBH mass function and their fractional contribution to dark matter. A significant enhancement in the binary PBH merger rate is found for the late three-body channel, which was previously treated as subdominant. In the case of delayed virialization onset at $z<10$, merger rates of dynamically formed PBH binaries are limited by the existing LVK binary BH detections. An increased merger frequency is revealed for PBH binaries with highly asymmetric mass ratios. We also calculate expected detection rates of binary PBH mergers for the TianQin space-based gravitational-wave interferometer and show them to be optimistic in the BHL accretion case even for very low initial PBH abundances $f\sim 10^{-6}$.

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