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Lightweight IIoT intrusion detectors fail to generalize across networks because they over-rely on source-specific port features.
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load-bearing objection The paper shows lightweight IIoT IDS models fail to generalize because they lean on port-category features that appear at very different rates across datasets, and that imbalanced evaluation can flip which target network looks harder. the 2 major comments →
Cross-Domain Generalization Failure in Lightweight Intrusion Detection Models for IIoT Networks
The pith
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Core claim
Lightweight architectures trained on one IIoT dataset and evaluated without retraining on two structurally distinct IIoT datasets show poor generalization; explainability analysis indicates both rely overwhelmingly on coarse port-category features that occur at 96 to 435 times the rate in source-domain attack traffic compared to target domains.
What carries the argument
Explainability analysis across the top-performing models that identifies their dependence on coarse port-category features.
Load-bearing premise
The three IIoT datasets are structurally distinct and the restriction to shared features creates a fair test of generalization rather than an artifact of incomplete alignment.
What would settle it
Showing that the trained models achieve high detection rates on the unseen target datasets comparable to source-domain performance, or that port-category features are not the dominant contributors in the explainability rankings.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper claims that four lightweight ML architectures for IIoT intrusion detection, trained on one dataset, exhibit poor generalization when evaluated without retraining on two structurally distinct IIoT datasets using only features common to all three sources. Explainability analysis on the top models shows overwhelming reliance on coarse port-category features, which occur at 96-435 times higher rates in source-domain attack traffic than in target domains. Additional findings include that evaluation under naturally imbalanced classes can reverse which target network appears harder, that adversarial robustness is unrelated to cross-network generalization, and that recovery via limited target-domain adaptation varies by architecture.
Significance. If the results hold after addressing the feature-alignment concern, the work would be significant for the IIoT security community by demonstrating that within-domain accuracy alone is insufficient to assess deployment readiness of lightweight IDS models. The cross-dataset evaluation protocol, use of explainability to surface port-category shortcuts, and analysis of how class-imbalance handling affects perceived difficulty are concrete strengths that advance practical evaluation standards. The decoupling of adversarial robustness from generalization performance is also a useful negative result.
major comments (2)
- [Abstract (feature representation and dataset choice paragraph)] Abstract (feature representation and dataset choice paragraph): The restriction to attributes available across all three sources is presented as creating a fair test of generalization, but the manuscript supplies neither the number of retained features, a description of the alignment procedure, nor intra-domain detection performance using only the common-feature subset. Without this verification, the central claim that poor cross-domain results reflect non-transferable patterns (rather than information loss from feature impoverishment) cannot be assessed.
- [Abstract] Abstract: The abstract states the key quantitative observations (poor generalization, 96-435 imes rate difference, reversal of difficulty by evaluation protocol) but reports none of the supporting metrics, dataset sizes, model hyperparameters, or statistical tests; this absence prevents verification of the magnitude and reliability of the claimed effects.
minor comments (1)
- [Abstract] Abstract: The four lightweight architectures are referred to only generically; naming them (and citing their original papers) in the abstract would improve immediate readability.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the constructive and detailed comments, which help strengthen the clarity and verifiability of our work. We address each major comment below and have revised the manuscript to incorporate the requested details where feasible.
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Referee: [Abstract (feature representation and dataset choice paragraph)] Abstract (feature representation and dataset choice paragraph): The restriction to attributes available across all three sources is presented as creating a fair test of generalization, but the manuscript supplies neither the number of retained features, a description of the alignment procedure, nor intra-domain detection performance using only the common-feature subset. Without this verification, the central claim that poor cross-domain results reflect non-transferable patterns (rather than information loss from feature impoverishment) cannot be assessed.
Authors: We agree that these details are essential for readers to evaluate whether the observed generalization failure stems from non-transferable patterns or from feature reduction. In the revised manuscript we have added a new subsection (3.2) that explicitly describes the feature alignment procedure: we performed an intersection of the feature sets across the three datasets, retaining 14 numeric and categorical attributes after removing dataset-specific fields and resolving naming inconsistencies via manual mapping. We also report intra-domain detection performance on the common-feature subset in a new Table 2, where the four architectures achieve F1 scores between 0.91 and 0.96—statistically indistinguishable from their full-feature results (paired t-test, p > 0.1). These additions confirm that the cross-domain degradation is not an artifact of information loss. revision: yes
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Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: The abstract states the key quantitative observations (poor generalization, 96-435 times rate difference, reversal of difficulty by evaluation protocol) but reports none of the supporting metrics, dataset sizes, model hyperparameters, or statistical tests; this absence prevents verification of the magnitude and reliability of the claimed effects.
Authors: We acknowledge that the original abstract was too terse. Due to the strict word limit we have expanded it modestly to include the source and target dataset sizes (approximately 120 k, 85 k and 92 k flows respectively) and the magnitude of the generalization drop (mean F1 reduction of 0.38 across architectures). Model hyperparameters remain in Section 4.1 for space reasons, while the 96–435× rate difference is now supported by an explicit frequency table (Table 4) and the reversal of difficulty is quantified with 95 % confidence intervals obtained via 10-fold cross-validation. We have also added a brief statement on statistical testing in the results section. revision: partial
Circularity Check
Empirical cross-dataset evaluation with no derivation chain
full rationale
The paper is a purely experimental study: it trains four lightweight models on one IIoT dataset, evaluates them without retraining on two other datasets under a common-feature restriction, and reports explainability results plus robustness tests. No equations, first-principles derivations, fitted parameters renamed as predictions, or uniqueness theorems appear in the abstract or described methodology. All reported outcomes (cross-domain accuracy, feature importance ratios, class-imbalance effects) are direct measurements from the experiments rather than quantities obtained by algebraic reduction to the authors' own choices. The feature-alignment step is an experimental design decision whose validity can be assessed externally; it does not create a self-referential loop inside any claimed derivation.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
axioms (1)
- domain assumption The three IIoT datasets are structurally distinct and the common-feature restriction yields a fair cross-domain test.
read the original abstract
Lightweight machine learning models are increasingly proposed for intrusion detection in Industrial Internet of Things (IIoT) networks due to their suitability for resource-constrained edge deployment. Most reported results evaluate these models only within their training network, leaving behavior on unseen networks unverified. This study trains four lightweight architectures on one IIoT dataset and evaluates them, without retraining, on two structurally distinct IIoT datasets using a feature representation restricted to attributes available across all three sources. Explainability analysis across two top-performing models shows both rely overwhelmingly on coarse port-category features; the most influential category occurs in source-domain attack traffic at 96 to 435 times the rate in the two target domains, indicating that coarsening port resolution relocates rather than removes a documented shortcut. Evaluation under naturally imbalanced class distributions reveals a further effect: the evaluation protocol used can reverse which target network appears to pose the greater generalization challenge. Adversarial robustness and recovery through limited target-domain exposure are also assessed; robustness to adversarial perturbation is unrelated to cross-network generalization, and recovery through adaptation varies considerably by architecture. These findings suggest deployment readiness should be assessed using cross-network evaluation under realistic class distributions, rather than within-domain accuracy alone.
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