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Context-aware narrative enrichment substantially improves story rewriting alignment with reader preferences over style adaptation.

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load-bearing objection New benchmark and GRPO-based model for story rewriting add something concrete, but the 24.5% pilot gain is not shown to transfer to the benchmark or real preferences. the 3 major comments →

arxiv 2605.28073 v1 pith:ZXJ7MY2Q submitted 2026-05-27 cs.CL cs.AI

StoryLens: Preference-Aligned Story Rewriting via Context-Aware Narrative Enrichment

Hanwen Cui , Yuting Mei , Yuhang Fu , Dingyi Yang , Qin Jin This is my paper
classification cs.CL cs.AI
keywords story rewritingpreference alignmentcontext-awarenarrative enrichmentreward modelreinforcement learningbenchmarkpersonalization
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The pith

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The paper seeks to demonstrate that adapting stories to reader preferences works best when the rewriting process enriches the narrative using story context and preference profiles, rather than relying on style transfer. Evidence from a pilot study indicates marginal benefits from style changes alone but large gains from context enhancement. The authors support this by releasing a benchmark dataset, a satisfaction reward model, and a rewriting system trained via fine-tuning and reinforcement learning that beats existing methods on multiple quality measures. If correct, this shifts the focus in personalized narrative generation toward deeper integration of reader and story context.

Core claim

Story rewriting for preference alignment demands context-aware narrative enrichment beyond stylistic changes, demonstrated by a 24.5 percent improvement in user preference alignment from context-enhanced methods compared to 2.3 percent from style adaptation alone, enabled by STORYLENSBENCH, STORYLENSEVAL, and STORYLENSWRITER.

What carries the argument

Context-aware narrative enrichment, which incorporates structured story books and multi-dimensional reader preference profiles to guide rewriting while maintaining plot consistency.

Load-bearing premise

The pilot human study findings generalize to the large benchmark and the preference profiles accurately represent real reader preferences.

What would settle it

A follow-up study measuring reader preference alignment percentages for model outputs versus style-only baselines on the full STORYLENSBENCH dataset.

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If this is right

  • STORYLENSBENCH allows for large-scale testing of preference-aligned story rewrites.
  • STORYLENSEVAL provides an automated way to score reader satisfaction.
  • STORYLENSWRITER's combination of supervised fine-tuning and GRPO reinforcement learning yields superior results in fidelity, coherence, and satisfaction.
  • The evaluation framework covers key aspects of rewritten story quality.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the context enrichment approach scales, it could apply to adapting other narrative forms such as scripts or articles for individual readers.
  • Explicit modeling of reader preferences might allow for more efficient creation of personalized content libraries.
  • Future systems could dynamically adjust enrichment levels based on detected reader profiles.

Editorial analysis

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Desk editor's note, referee report, simulated authors' rebuttal, and a circularity audit.

Referee Report

3 major / 1 minor

Summary. The paper claims that style adaptation alone yields only marginal reader satisfaction gains (2.3%) while context-enhanced rewriting improves preference alignment by 24.5% (per an unreported pilot human study); motivated by this, it introduces STORYLENSBENCH (structured stories + multi-dimensional preference profiles + ranked rewrites), STORYLENSEVAL (a reward model), and STORYLENSWRITER (SFT + GRPO RL), which outperforms baselines on fidelity, coherence, and satisfaction metrics.

Significance. If the central empirical claims hold after proper validation, the work would usefully shift focus in personalized narrative generation from surface style transfer to context-aware enrichment, and the released benchmark plus two-stage RL pipeline could serve as a reproducible testbed for future preference-aligned rewriting systems.

major comments (3)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: the motivating claim that context-enhanced rewriting yields a 24.5% gain (vs. 2.3% for style adaptation) rests exclusively on an unreported pilot human study; no participant count, study protocol, preference elicitation method, or statistical significance is supplied, so it is impossible to assess whether these signals transfer to the multi-dimensional profiles in STORYLENSBENCH.
  2. [Evaluation framework] Evaluation framework (and § on STORYLENSWRITER training): STORYLENSEVAL is used both as the reward model inside GRPO and as the primary reader-satisfaction metric; without an independent human validation set or cross-check against the original pilot preferences, this creates a circularity risk that undermines the claim that STORYLENSWRITER improves “reader satisfaction.”
  3. [STORYLENSBENCH] STORYLENSBENCH construction: the paper provides no evidence that the multi-dimensional preference profiles or ranked rewrites were validated against actual reader behavior outside the pilot; the extrapolation from the pilot sample to the benchmark therefore remains an untested assumption load-bearing for the entire pipeline.
minor comments (1)
  1. [Abstract] Notation for STORYLENSBENCH, STORYLENSEVAL, and STORYLENSWRITER is introduced without an explicit acronym table or first-use definition, which reduces readability.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

3 responses · 0 unresolved

We appreciate the referee's insightful comments, which highlight important aspects of our evaluation and benchmark construction. We provide point-by-point responses below and indicate where revisions will be made to address the concerns.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] the motivating claim that context-enhanced rewriting yields a 24.5% gain (vs. 2.3% for style adaptation) rests exclusively on an unreported pilot human study; no participant count, study protocol, preference elicitation method, or statistical significance is supplied, so it is impossible to assess whether these signals transfer to the multi-dimensional profiles in STORYLENSBENCH.

    Authors: We agree that details of the pilot human study are necessary to substantiate the motivating claim in the abstract. In the revised manuscript, we will expand the relevant section to include the participant count, study protocol, preference elicitation method, and statistical significance testing. This will clarify how the pilot results inform the preference profiles used in STORYLENSBENCH. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Evaluation framework] STORYLENSEVAL is used both as the reward model inside GRPO and as the primary reader-satisfaction metric; without an independent human validation set or cross-check against the original pilot preferences, this creates a circularity risk that undermines the claim that STORYLENSWRITER improves “reader satisfaction.”

    Authors: The concern about circularity is valid given the dual use of STORYLENSEVAL. We will revise the evaluation framework to incorporate an independent human validation set consisting of new reader judgments on a held-out portion of stories. We will report the correlation between the model's scores and these human preferences to provide external validation of the satisfaction improvements. revision: yes

  3. Referee: [STORYLENSBENCH] the paper provides no evidence that the multi-dimensional preference profiles or ranked rewrites were validated against actual reader behavior outside the pilot; the extrapolation from the pilot sample to the benchmark therefore remains an untested assumption load-bearing for the entire pipeline.

    Authors: We acknowledge that the benchmark construction relies on the pilot without additional external validation reported. To address this, the revised paper will include results from a new validation experiment with additional readers to verify that the multi-dimensional profiles and ranked rewrites reflect actual reader preferences beyond the initial pilot sample. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity in derivation chain

full rationale

The paper's motivation rests on an independent pilot human study (2.3% vs 24.5% gains) whose results are presented as external evidence rather than derived from the benchmark or models. STORYLENSBENCH is newly constructed with structured stories and preference profiles; STORYLENSEVAL and STORYLENSWRITER are trained on it using standard SFT + RL; evaluation uses a multi-aspect framework (fidelity, coherence, satisfaction) that does not reduce by construction to the training inputs or self-citations. No self-definitional equations, fitted inputs renamed as predictions, or load-bearing self-citation chains appear in the provided text.

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Story rewriting aims to adapt existing narratives to diverse reader preferences while preserving plot consistency and narrative coherence. Unlike conventional work on style transfer, we argue that effective story rewriting demands context-aware narrative enrichment beyond surface-level stylistic adaptation. Our pilot human study shows that style adaptation alone provides only marginal gains in reader satisfaction (2.3%), while context-enhanced rewriting substantially improves user preference alignment (24.5%). Motivated by this, we introduce STORYLENSBENCH, a large-scale benchmark for preference-aligned story rewriting, comprising structured story books, multi-dimensional reader preference profiles, and ranked context-aware rewritten stories. Building on this benchmark, we propose STORYLENSEVAL, a reward model for estimating reader satisfaction over rewritten stories, and STORYLENSWRITER, a two-stage rewriting model combining supervised fine-tuning with GRPO-based reinforcement learning. We further establish a comprehensive evaluation framework covering fidelity, coherence, and reader satisfaction. Experimental results demonstrate that STORYLENSWRITER consistently outperforms strong generation and personalization baselines, highlighting the importance of context-aware narrative enrichment for personalized story rewriting.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2605.28073 by Dingyi Yang, Hanwen Cui, Qin Jin, Yuhang Fu, Yuting Mei.

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Figure 1. Figure 1: Overview of our story rewriting task. Given [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p001_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. Figure 2: Overview of the dataset construction process. The green document icon in the bottom right corner [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p003_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: Overview of the training process for STORYLENSEVAL [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: Overview of the training framework for STORYLENSWRITER. Our training data is formatted as ranked rewrite pairs conditioned on specific reader preferences. As illustrated in [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_4.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 5. Figure 5: Demographic distributions of raw Goodreads [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_5.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 6. Figure 6: Book genre and length distributions in STO￾RYLENSBENCH. A Dataset Details [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p012_6.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 7. Figure 7: Top keywords in user preferences across five preference dimensions. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p013_7.png] view at source ↗

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