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The strong CP problem versus Planck scale physics

High Energy Physics - Phenomenology · Submitted 2 Sep 1996 · 36 references

Pith's verdict: A useful constraint paper: the relaxed PQ criterion and the one-loop SUSY regeneration result are real, but the Landau-pole claim is soft and the paper knows it.

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CitationBogdan A. Dobrescu (Boston University). "The strong CP problem versus Planck scale physics." arXiv:hep-ph/9609221 (1996). https://pith.science/paper/YHSCQSVT
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The paper claims

The paper argues that the usual rule for protecting the axion from Planck-scale symmetry breaking is too strict, and that once the rule is relaxed, supersymmetric axion models still fail while the composite models that get the Peccei-Quinn

The reading

The paper asks what an axion model must do to survive quantum gravity. Earlier work held that any gauge-invariant operator of dimension below 10 that breaks the Peccei-Quinn symmetry would shift $¥bar¥theta$ away from zero and ruin the solution to the strong CP problem. Dobrescu argues this test is too strict: an operator matters only if it is built entirely from fields that acquire vacuum expectation values, because operators containing vev-less fields generate only suppressed axion interactions. Applying the relaxed test, he finds that supersymmetric axion models still fail once soft supersymmetry breaking is included, while the non-supersymmetric composite axion models that produce the PQ scale naturally run into a cosmological relic problem and a Landau pole for the strong coupling.

What carries the argument

Three pieces of machinery carry the argument. The first is the relaxed naturalness criterion itself: gauge symmetries need only forbid PQ-breaking operators of dimension below 10 that are built exclusively from fields with vacuum expectation values, so that operators such as $(¥varphi_i¥psi)^2(¥chi_j¥omega_k)$ in Randall's model are harmless because they contain no vev-carrying field. The second is the one-loop interference between a soft supersymmetry-breaking trilinear scalar term and a Planck-suppressed superpotential operator, which reintroduces a PQ-breaking scalar potential that holomorphy alone had suppressed. The third is a renormalization-group estimate of $¥alpha_s^{-1}(M_P)$ in the composite models, combining the perturbative running with estimated non-perturbative contributions $¥delta_{PGB}$ and $¥delta_{axicolor}$ from colored pseudo-Goldstone bosons and axihadrons.

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Core claim

The central claim is that the standard dimension-10 prohibition on Planck-induced Peccei-Quinn breaking can be relaxed to a narrower one: only operators formed purely of fields with vacuum expectation values of order $f_{PQ}$ are dangerous, since an operator containing vev-less fields merely induces a suppressed axion coupling. Applying this relaxed criterion, the paper shows that supersymmetric axion models do not pass. In the $E_6 ¥times U(1)_X$ model whose renormalizable superpotential is $¥kappa ¥Phi ¥Psi_+ ¥Psi_-$, the soft trilinear term $¥kappa' m_s ¥Phi ¥Psi_+ ¥Psi_-$ interferes at one loop with the Planck-suppressed $¥Phi^6$ term to generate a six-scalar operator with coefficient of order $¥kappa^*¥kappa_1¥kappa' m_s/(4¥pi)^2 M_P^3 ¥log(M_P/m_s)$, and the requirement that $¥bar¥theta$ stay below $10^{-9}$ forces $|¥kappa ¥kappa_1 ¥kappa'| < O(10^{-18})$. A five-scalar term $¥Phi^4¥Phi^¥dagger$ is induced independently of the soft trilinear coupling, and the proposed repair with an extra real $E_6$ representation fails because gauge-anomaly cancellation forces the two $¥Psi$ charges to be opposite, leaving the dangerous operator intact.

Load-bearing premise

The claim that Randall's composite axion model hits a Landau pole below the Planck scale depends on estimated non-perturbative contributions to the running of the strong coupling being positive and large, and the paper itself says those contributions are hard to compute.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • Any axion model that relies on the holomorphy of a supersymmetric superpotential to protect the Peccei-Quinn symmetry must be re-examined once soft supersymmetry breaking is included, because the protection does not survive to the scalar potential.
  • Composite axion models without fundamental scalars satisfy the naturalness requirement on $f_{PQ}$ easily, but the only one that also evades Planck-induced PQ-breaking operators is driven to a Landau pole for QCD below the Planck scale.
  • The heavy stable axibaryons and color-triplet pseudo-Goldstone bosons of composite axion models are cosmologically excluded unless there is a period of inflation with reheating temperature below their masses.
  • Unifying color with the axicolor gauge group would simultaneously make the heavy stable particles decay and remove the Landau pole, so the viability of composite axions reduces to whether such a unification can be constructed.
  • Models that tie the Peccei-Quinn scale to the scale of dynamical supersymmetry breaking are especially exposed, because the products of fields needed to generate the $Â¥mu$ and $B$ terms are themselves gauge-invariant and can be accompanied by Planck-suppressed PQ-breaking operators.

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Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The argument generalizes past axions: any global symmetry whose protection rests on the holomorphic structure of a supersymmetric theory should be checked against the soft terms, since a Planck-suppressed operator plus a soft trilinear coupling is enough to regenerate the forbidden term at one loop.
  • If the Landau-pole conclusion holds, it converts a model-building preference into a constraint: composite axion models are only viable inside a unified group large enough to contain both color and axicolor, which makes the search for such embeddings the natural next calculation.
  • The relaxed vev-only criterion suggests a practical checklist for future axion model building: list the fields that condense or acquire expectation values, and check PQ-breaking operators built from those alone, rather than cataloguing every gauge-invariant contraction.
  • A controlled lattice or large-$N$ estimate of the axicolor contribution to the running of the strong coupling would settle the paper's most fragile quantitative claim without requiring new data.
Original abstract

We discuss conditions that should be satisfied by axion models for solving the strong CP problem. It has been observed that Planck scale effects may render the axion models ineffective if there are gauge invariant operators of dimension less than 10 which break explicitly the Peccei-Quinn (PQ) symmetry. We argue that only those operators formed of fields which have vacuum expectation values are dangerous. Supersymmetric axion models fail to prevent even this restricted class of operators. Furthermore, the models that relate the PQ scale and the supersymmetry breaking scale are particularly sensitive to gauge invariant PQ-breaking operators. By contrast, in non-supersymmetric composite axion models the PQ scale arises naturally, and the dangerous operators can be avoided. However, the composite axion models contain heavy stable particles which are cosmologically ruled out. Another problem is a Landau pole for the QCD coupling constant. Both these problems may be solved if the unification of color with the gauge interactions which bind the axion could be achieved.

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We discuss conditions that should be satisfied by axion models for solving the strong CP problem. It has been observed that Planck scale effects may render the axion models ineffective if there are gauge invariant operators of dimension less than 10 which break explicitly the Peccei-Quinn (PQ) symmetry. We argue that only those operators formed of fields which have vacuum expectation values are dangerous. Supersymmetric axion models fail to prevent even this restricted class of operators. Furthermore, the models that relate the PQ scale and the supersymmetry breaking scale are particularly sensitive to gauge invariant PQ-breaking operators. By contrast, in non-supersymmetric composite axion models the PQ scale arises naturally, and the dangerous operators can be avoided. However, the composite axion models contain heavy stable particles which are cosmologically ruled out. Another problem is a Landau pole for the QCD coupling constant. Both these problems may be solved if the unification of color with the gauge interactions which bind the axion could be achieved.

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s0 We discuss conditions that should be satisfied by axion models for solving the strong CP problem. contribution 0.75 0.77 0.05 asserted 0.53
s1 It has been observed that Planck scale effects may render the axion models ineffective if there are gauge invariant operators of dimension less than 10 which break explicitly the Peccei-Quinn (PQ) symmetry. background 0.99 0.09 0.09 hedged possibility 0.97
s2 We argue that only those operators formed of fields which have vacuum expectation values are dangerous. contribution 0.60 0.68 0.17 asserted 0.97
s3 Supersymmetric axion models fail to prevent even this restricted class of operators. result 0.92 0.53 0.14 asserted 1.00
s4 Furthermore, the models that relate the PQ scale and the supersymmetry breaking scale are particularly sensitive to gauge invariant PQ-breaking operators. result 0.83 0.45 0.07 asserted 0.98
s5 By contrast, in non-supersymmetric composite axion models the PQ scale arises naturally, and the dangerous operators can be avoided. result 0.87 0.39 0.23 asserted 1.00
s6 However, the composite axion models contain heavy stable particles which are cosmologically ruled out. limitation 0.64 0.19 0.06 asserted 1.00
s7 Another problem is a Landau pole for the QCD coupling constant. limitation 0.61 0.20 0.03 asserted 0.99
s8 Both these problems may be solved if the unification of color with the gauge interactions which bind the axion could be achieved. interpretation 0.40 0.28 0.45 hedged possibility 1.00

What kind of paper the classifier reports this is: position or commentary 0.79 · evidence from argument 0.99.

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32 arXiv papers cite this in 51 sentences

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  • The original work of Ref. [ref] and the analysis of Dobrescu of Ref. [ref] considered the pure QCD case where $=(3)_c$, but the model can be straightforwardly generalized to a GUT scenario by replacing the fundamental representation of $(3)_c$ with that of $(5)$.

    Chiral models of composite axions and accidental Peccei-Quinn symmetry · Randall's model · 0.94

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  • The squared masses of the triplet and octet pNG bosons are estimated as [equation] Radiative corrections from QCD [ref] are [equation] where the gauge couplings are evaluated at their respective dynamical scales, $m_π^0$ and $m_π^±$ are the neutral and charged pion masses and we have used $Λ_S / Λ_QCD ∼√(3/N)f_S / f_π$ from NDA.

    Footprints of New Strong Dynamics via Anomaly and the 750 GeV Diphoton · The masses of the pNG bosons · 0.86

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  • However, as is argued in Ref. [ref] , since these operators do not acquire a VEV, their modification to the axion potential is at least as suppressed as the lowest dimensional operator that involves only fields with VEVs from spontaneous $_PQ$ breaking.

    The Quality/Cosmology Tension for a Post-Inflation QCD Axion · Cosmology/quality tension · 0.98

  • The Planck-scale operators which dominantly cause $θ̅$ to deviate from zero are those involving only scalars with high scale VEVs, while operators involving fields that do not obtain VEVs are expected to be subdominant [ref] .

    Protecting the Axion with Local Baryon Number · PQ Protection from U1B · 0.97

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