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Possible Formation of QGP-droplets in Proton-Proton Collisions at the CERN Large Hadron Collider

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Pith's one-line read High-multiplicity proton-proton collisions at the LHC display quark-gluon-plasma-like signatures and should be studied as possible sites of QGP droplet formation rather than as a mere baseline.

desk verdict A readable 2019 feature-article review of QGP-like signatures in high-multiplicity pp collisions, with an honest 'strongly assuming' hedge but no new evidence and no quantitative exclusion of the non-QGP alternatives it lists. read the letter →

arxiv 1908.10566 v1 pith:KY5K5SGU submitted 2019-08-28 nucl-ex hep-exhep-phnucl-th

Raghunath Sahoo This is my paper · ORCID
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keywords quark-gluonplasmaproton-protoncollisionshigh-multiplicityeventsstrangenessenhancementcollectivityridgecorrelationsQGPdropletssmallsystems
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The pith

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The reading

This article argues that the highest-multiplicity proton-proton collisions at the LHC produce matter with quark-gluon-plasma-like signatures: enhanced multi-strange particle production, a blast-wave freeze-out temperature inside the lattice-QCD deconfinement range, and a long-range near-side ridge. The author contends that pp collisions at these energies should no longer be treated only as a reference for heavy-ion collisions, but should be examined as possible sources of QGP droplets. If the argument is right, small collision systems join heavy ions as a laboratory for the QCD phase transition at low baryon density.

What carries the argument

The argument runs on pattern matching between small and large collision systems. Its central objects are three measured signatures: the charged-multiplicity-dependent ratios of strange and multi-strange yields to pions; the low-$p_T$ identified-particle spectra fit simultaneously with the Boltzmann-Gibbs blast-wave model to extract a common freeze-out temperature and radial flow velocity; and the long-range two-particle azimuthal correlation ridge. The paper weighs these against competing confined mechanisms it lists—color-rope hadronization, color reconnection, and multiparton interactions—and the case for QGP droplets depends on those alternatives failing to reproduce the full pattern.

What would settle it

A calculation that reproduces the measured strangeness-to-pion ratios, the blast-wave freeze-out parameters, and the ridge in high-multiplicity pp collisions using only color ropes, color reconnection, and multiparton interactions—with no deconfined phase—would remove the empirical basis for the droplet interpretation. A second check would be to estimate the initial energy density of these events: a value below the lattice-QCD threshold of about 1 GeV/fm$^3$ would undercut the case that deconfinement is reached.

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Core claim

The paper's central claim is that high-multiplicity pp collisions at LHC energies generate a system whose final-state observables match those used to identify deconfined matter in heavy-ion collisions: the ratios of multi-strange hadrons to pions approach Pb-Pb values, the simultaneous blast-wave fit to identified particle spectra yields a freeze-out temperature $T_{\rm fo} = 163 \pm 10$ MeV and radial flow $\langle \beta \rangle = 0.49 \pm 0.02$, and two-particle correlations show a same-side ridge over a long rapidity range. From this the paper concludes that LHC hadronic collisions may create matter with QGP-like signatures and that the field should search for possible QGP droplets in pp events instead of using pp as a baseline. This is an interpretive review built on existing measurements, not a new experimental result.

Load-bearing premise

The load-bearing premise is that the strangeness enhancement, flow-like spectra, and ridge seen in high-multiplicity pp collisions point to a deconfined partonic phase, rather than being fully explained by color-rope hadronization, color reconnection, or multiparton interactions that leave the matter confined.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • High-multiplicity pp events should be analyzed with the heavy-ion toolbox—blast-wave fits, strangeness ratios, flow correlations—rather than only as a baseline.
  • The heavy-ion QGP signatures not yet measured in pp, such as J/$\psi$ suppression and jet quenching, become explicit search targets in high-multiplicity events.
  • The similarity of the extracted freeze-out temperature to lattice-QCD deconfinement estimates implies thermal-statistical descriptions can apply to small systems.
  • If QGP droplets form in pp, the boundary of QGP studies shifts: pp collisions become a channel for studying the QCD phase transition at low baryon chemical potential, not just a reference for heavy-ion collisions.
  • Because final-state particle yields scale with charged multiplicity across collision species, the multiplicity density of the final state, rather than the projectile size, may control the onset of collective phenomena.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • A testable extension is to apply event-shape engineering to the strangeness and flow observables: if only isotropic high-multiplicity events show the heavy-ion-like ratios, the effect would be tied to a soft, possibly deconfined bulk rather than to hard jetty processes.
  • The multiplicity threshold $N_{\rm ch} \geq 20$ identified in the paper as a thermodynamic limit could serve as a predicted onset point for droplet signatures, giving experiments a specific search window.
  • If the droplet picture holds, high-multiplicity pp collisions at near-zero baryon density could probe the QCD crossover region in a smaller, cleaner system than heavy-ion collisions, whose larger size complicates the interpretation of initial-state effects.
  • A null result in quarkonia or jet-quenching searches in high-multiplicity pp events would not disprove droplet formation but would constrain how much of the deconfined medium is produced, suggesting a finite-size effect rather than a full bulk phase.
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Referee Report

2 major / 6 minor

Summary. This feature article argues that high-multiplicity proton-proton (pp) collisions at the LHC exhibit QGP-like signatures—strangeness enhancement, collective flow extracted from blast-wave fits, and a long-range ridge—and proposes that the community should search for possible QGP-droplets in pp collisions. The paper reviews published ALICE and CMS results, lists several non-QGP hadronic mechanisms (DIPSY rope hadronization, PYTHIA color reconnection, multiparton interactions), and outlines future directions such as event-shape engineering and non-extensive thermodynamics.

Significance. The article provides a concise and accessible synthesis of recent small-system observations that are often discussed in the context of the QGP-droplet hypothesis. Its main strengths are the accurate citation of public experimental data and the explicit enumeration of alternative hadronic explanations, which makes clear that the QGP interpretation is not unique. The paper does not present new data, model calculations, or a quantitative comparison between QGP and hadronic scenarios, so its scientific contribution is as a perspective rather than a primary research result. It may serve as a useful introduction for students and researchers outside the subfield, but the central claim remains speculative.

major comments (2)
  1. [New Observations in pp Collisions, item (b)] The statement that the kinetic freeze-out temperature T_fo = 163 ± 10 MeV 'remarkably falls within the range of temperature required for a deconfinement transition as per the lattice QCD estimates' is a misleading comparison. A kinetic freeze-out temperature extracted from a blast-wave fit is not the same as the chemical freeze-out temperature, and values near 150–170 MeV are typical for hadronizing systems at high multiplicity even without QGP formation. The text should either cite a direct measurement of the chemical freeze-out temperature or explicitly state that this agreement is not evidence for deconfinement.
  2. [Emergent Phenomena and Summary and Outlook] The manuscript lists DIPSY rope hadronization, PYTHIA color reconnection, and multiparton interactions as hadronic explanations for the observed strangeness enhancement, flow-like features, and ridge, but it does not state clearly that the existence of these alternatives means the QGP-droplet interpretation is not uniquely determined by the data. The conclusion 'we must look for possible QGP-droplets in pp collisions' should be qualified to acknowledge that a decisive test would require falsifiable predictions that distinguish the QGP-droplet scenario from these hadronic mechanisms.
minor comments (6)
  1. [New Observations in pp Collisions, item (b)] The claim that 'the only function that well describes the pT-spectra of identified particles in pp collisions at the LHC energies is the Tsallis-Levy' is an overstatement; other functions (e.g., Hagedorn, blast-wave with Tsallis basis) are also used in the literature. Please soften to 'one of the functions that well describes...'.
  2. [Abstract] Reference [2] is cited for 'degree of collectivity' in the abstract, but that reference is a phenomenological paper rather than an experimental measurement; consider citing the experimental works on collectivity in pp collisions (e.g., ALICE and CMS papers) instead.
  3. [Introduction] The definition of QGP as a 'locally thermally equilibrated system where the partons are deconfined from the hadrons so that the color degrees of freedom become manifest in nuclear rather than the nucleonic volume' is imprecise; the standard definition is a state of deconfined quarks and gluons in thermal equilibrium. Please reword.
  4. [THE SPACE-TIME EVOLUTION] Figure 2 is credited to a blog URL ([33]); for a journal article it would be better to reproduce a figure from a peer-reviewed source or provide a more citable reference for the space-time diagram.
  5. [References] Several references are incomplete or contain errors: [6] should be 'J. Adams et al.' (STAR Collaboration), not 'J. Adam'; [18] similarly should be 'J. Adams et al.'; [27] lacks a title and author list; [32] and [33] are URLs and would benefit from full bibliographic details.
  6. [Throughout] There are minor typographical issues, including 'muti-particle' in the Introduction (should be 'multi-particle'), 'multiparton' vs. 'multipartonic' (the standard term is 'multiparton interactions'), and the odd capitalization in the author affiliation line ('DiSciPline of PhySicS'). Please proofread the text.

Circularity Check

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No circularity: the paper is a review of external LHC measurements and does not derive any prediction from its own fitted inputs.

full rationale

This is a narrative review article, not a derivation. The central interpretive claim, that high-multiplicity pp collisions may create QGP droplets, rests on external measurements: ALICE strangeness enhancement [1], CMS ridge correlations [3], and the blast-wave freeze-out temperature quoted from ALICE (T_fo = 163 ± 10 MeV, <β> = 0.49 ± 0.02). The paper performs no new fits, defines no new equations, and derives no observable from its own assumptions. The freeze-out temperature and flow velocity are explicitly taken from the ALICE publication [1], not computed in this article. Self-citations appear in the 'Emergent Phenomena' list as literature pointers to the author's phenomenological studies of Tsallis thermodynamics, spherocity, and MPI; none of these is load-bearing for the QGP-droplet claim, and removing them would not change the argument. The paper even lists non-QGP alternatives (DIPSY rope hadronization, PYTHIA color reconnection, multiparton interactions) in the same section, which shows the QGP interpretation is presented as one possibility rather than as a forced conclusion. The Summary's phrase 'strongly assuming' is an explicit statement of the paper's interpretive assumption, not a hidden circular step. Since every signature cited comes from independent experimental collaborations or external models, there is no fitted input renamed as a prediction and no self-citation chain that the central claim reduces to. Score 0.

Assumptions & free parameters 2 free parameters · 3 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The article's central claim rests on prior measurements plus contested domain assumptions. No new data or model is introduced. The quoted blast-wave temperature and flow velocity are fitted parameters from ALICE (ref [1]), so they are free parameters inherited from earlier work. The QGP interpretation assumes that alternative small-system mechanisms do not explain the data.

free parameters (2)
  • Kinetic freeze-out temperature T_fo from blast-wave fit = 163 +/- 10 MeV
    Quoted from ALICE analysis (ref [1]) and presented as evidence that pp systems reach the deconfinement temperature from lattice QCD. This value is a fitted parameter of the blast-wave model applied to identified particle spectra, not a prediction.
  • Radial flow velocity <beta> from blast-wave fit = 0.49 +/- 0.02
    Quoted from the same ALICE analysis (ref [1]) and used to argue for collective behavior in high-multiplicity pp collisions. It is a fit parameter.
assumptions (3)
  • domain assumption The observed enhancement of multi-strange particles, radial-flow-like spectra, and long-range ridge in high-multiplicity pp collisions are primarily signatures of a deconfined QGP phase rather than of color-rope hadronization, color reconnection, or multipartonic interactions.
    This is the central interpretive pivot. The paper itself lists DIPSY color ropes, PYTHIA color reconnection, and MPI as alternative explanations (EMERGENT PHENOMENA, items a, b, d), so the QGP interpretation is assumed, not derived.
  • domain assumption A blast-wave fit freeze-out temperature of 163 +/- 10 MeV is comparable to the lattice QCD critical temperature (150-170 MeV) and therefore indicates that the system reached deconfinement.
    This assumption connects a model-dependent fit parameter to the QCD phase boundary (Section 'Transverse momentum Spectra, Collectivity' and refs [1],[7]). Without it, the temperature comparison carries no deconfinement implication.
  • domain assumption The space-time evolution of high-multiplicity pp collisions at the LHC resembles that of heavy-ion collisions, with a pre-equilibrium phase and a possible QGP stage.
    Stated in 'THE SPACE-TIME EVOLUTION' and crucial for transferring heavy-ion QGP signatures to pp collisions. It is an adoption of a heavy-ion picture, not established for pp.

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Pith. "Pith review of Possible Formation of QGP-droplets in Proton-Proton Collisions at the CERN Large Hadron Collider." pith.science (2026). https://pith.science/paper/KY5K5SGU

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Proton-proton (pp) collisions have been traditionally used as a baseline measurement in the search for a deconfined state of matter in heavy-ion collisions at ultrarelativistic energies. The unprecedented collision energies that are available at the Large Hadron Collider (LHC) at the European Laboratory for Nuclear Research (CERN) have illuminated new challenges in understanding the possible formation of droplets of this deconfined matter of partonic degrees of freedom in hadronic collisions, especially in high-multiplicity events. Enhancement of multi-strange particles compared to pions, degree of collectivity, comparable freeze-out temperature with heavy-ion collisions, observation of a long-range ridge-like structure for high-multiplicity events are some of the experimental observations in this direction. In this article, we discuss some of the experimental observables and outline new theoretical directions to understand the possibilities of exploring the formation of QGP-droplets in pp collisions at the LHC.

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