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Adiabatic CMB perturbations in pre-big bang string cosmology

High Energy Physics - Phenomenology · Submitted 24 Sep 2001 · 20 references

Pith's verdict: A legitimate feasibility study: the decaying-axion route to adiabatic perturbations in PBB is a real new combination, but the abstract's tilt range is wider than the body actually delivers.

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CitationKari Enqvist, Martin S. Sloth. "Adiabatic CMB perturbations in pre-big bang string cosmology." arXiv:hep-ph/0109214 (2001). https://pith.science/paper/JG7QCTSG
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A decaying axion could turn pre-big-bang isocurvature into adiabatic CMB perturbations

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Pre-big-bang string cosmology has a well-known observational problem: the quantum fluctuations it amplifies in the axion field come out as isocurvature (composition) perturbations, and balloon data say the cosmic microwave background is not purely isocurvature. This paper argues that the objection can be evaded if one of the many axions expected in such compactifications is massive, starts oscillating in an instanton-induced periodic potential, comes to dominate the energy density as non-relativistic dust, and then decays into photons. In that case the axion's own field fluctuations are imprinted as adiabatic (curvature) perturbations of the radiation, and the resulting spectral tilt $Delta n$ can be small, in the range $-0.1 lesssim Delta n lesssim 1$ quoted in the abstract. The tilt is not a free parameter: it is fixed by the axion spectral index $gamma$ together with the ratio of the string scale to the axion decay constant, $M_s/psi_0$, because the periodic potential exponentially damps fluctuations on scales larger than its period. If the argument holds, the pre-big-bang scenario survives as a candidate explanation of the observed microwave background rather than being excluded by it.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the periodic, instanton-induced axion potential, which does double duty. Its period $psi_0$ sets an exponential damping factor for long-wavelength modes, and its harmonic part makes the oscillating axion behave as non-relativistic dust so that it can dominate the energy budget before decaying. The bridge from axion field fluctuations to observables is the pair of relations $Delta n = 2 xi$ and $xi = gamma$ (up to the damping), where $gamma = 3/2 - r$ is the axion spectral tilt inherited from the pre-big-bang phase and $r = |alpha - 1/2|$ comes from the background scale factor. That chain lets the authors convert a measured amplitude of $10^{-4}$ at astrophysical scales into a predicted range for the adiabatic tilt, with $M_s/psi_0$ as the one adjustable ratio.

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Core claim

The paper's claim is that a pre-big-bang axion which dominates the energy density and then decays into photons generates adiabatic, nearly flat CMB perturbations. The mechanism has two halves. First, the axion potential $V(psi) = 12 V_0 (1 - cos(psi/psi_0))$ turns on at a temperature $T_Gamma$; once the axion mass reaches of order the Hubble rate the field oscillates, behaves as dust, and its energy density grows relative to radiation until it dominates. Second, because the potential is periodic, fluctuations larger than the period are damped: for a red axion spectrum the relative density perturbation is suppressed by $exp[-(1/2) int dk/k, P_psi(k)/psi_0^2]$, while for a blue spectrum there is no such damping and $(delta rho_a)_k/rho_a approx delta psi_k / sqrt(langle psi^2 rangle)$. Translating density perturbations into curvature perturbations through $Phi_k = -(3+3w)/(5+3w) R_k$ gives $Delta n = 2 xi$, so the adiabatic tilt is twice the density tilt. For the red case with $0.1 < M_s/psi_0 < 0.6$ the required amplitude $10^{-4}$ is reached for $-0.04 < gamma < -10^{-5}$, which the authors report as $0.3 lesssim Delta n lesssim 1$; only if $M_s/psi_0$ falls below about $10^{-4}$ does the damping switch off and allow a small negative tilt. For the blue case the amplitude fixes $gamma approx 0.13$, hence $Delta n approx 0.26$, slightly above the upper limit the authors quote from the Boomerang data, though they note an uncorrelated isocurvature component raises the best-fit adiabatic index. A separate section checks that the axion can in fact dominate and reheat: with lifetime $tau_a approx M'^2/m_a^3$ the reheat temperature comes out as $T_{RH} sim R^{-5/2}, 10^{-2}$ GeV with $R = M'/M_p$, low but above the big-bang nucleosynthesis bound, and the associated entropy production can dilute dangerous relics.

Load-bearing premise

The claim rests on the axion fluctuation spectrum keeping its shape through the onset of the strongly non-linear periodic potential, the coherent oscillation, and the decay, an evolution the authors explicitly decline to solve mode by mode and defer to later work.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The pre-big-bang scenario is no longer excluded by the isocurvature objection, since a decaying axion converts its fluctuations into a dominantly adiabatic component.
  • The adiabatic spectral tilt is predicted from $gamma$ and $M_s/psi_0$ rather than fitted, so a measured tilt constrains the string scale relative to the axion decay constant.
  • A late matter-dominated epoch from oscillating axions produces entropy that can dilute dangerous relics, with reheat temperature scaling as $R^{-5/2}$ and remaining above the nucleosynthesis bound.
  • The intermediate matter-dominated phase leaves a possible kink in the gravitational wave spectrum, which the authors flag as an observable signature.
  • Because these models generically contain several axions, the scenario predicts a mixture of adiabatic and isocurvature perturbations, with the adiabatic part dominating.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The tilt is a one-parameter family in $M_s/psi_0$, so a future measurement of both the adiabatic tilt and the isocurvature fraction would over-determine the ratio and test the mechanism rather than merely accommodate it.
  • The authors' own note that a quadratic potential preserves the large-scale spectrum suggests a clean numerical experiment: evolve modes through the non-linear potential epoch and check whether the tilt drifts by more than the quoted range.
  • If the damping is as efficient as claimed for $M_s/psi_0$ of order one, then the same exponential suppresses the smallest-$k$ modes that would otherwise make the axion dominate early, which is why the scenario needs the axion to dominate through dust behaviour rather than through large long-wavelength fluctuations.
  • The reheat temperature being low but above the nucleosynthesis bound puts this scenario in a range where a late entropy dump also dilutes whatever baryon asymmetry was produced earlier, so any viable version needs a baryogenesis source after or during the decay.
Original abstract

We consider the pre-big bang scenario with a massive axion field which starts to dominate energy density when oscillating in an instanton-induced potential and subsequently reheats the universe as it decays into photons, thus creating adiabatic CMB perturbations. We find that the fluctuations in the axion field can give rise to a nearly flat spectrum of adiabatic perturbations with a spectral tilt $\Delta n$ in the range $-0.1 \lesssim \Delta n \lesssim 1$.

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We consider the pre-big bang scenario with a massive axion field which starts to dominate energy density when oscillating in an instanton-induced potential and subsequently reheats the universe as it decays into photons, thus creating adiabatic CMB perturbations. We find that the fluctuations in the axion field can give rise to a nearly flat spectrum of adiabatic perturbations with a spectral tilt $\Delta n$ in the range $-0.1 \lesssim \Delta n \lesssim 1$.

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Figure 1. Levels of constant (δρa)k/ρa as a function of Ms/ψ0 on the horizontal axis and γ on the vertical axis. The three lines correspond to (δρa)k/ρa = 10−3 , 10−4 , and 10−5 . From

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