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Cluster Abundance Constraints on Quintessence Models

Astrophysics · Submitted 2 Apr 1998 · 22 references

Pith's verdict: The w-dependent γ fit and the quintessence growth index are worth having; the fit ships without residuals or a stated domain, and Eq. 13 contradicts its own ΛCDM limit.

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CitationLimin Wang, Paul J. Steinhardt (University of Pennsylvania). "Cluster Abundance Constraints on Quintessence Models." arXiv:astro-ph/9804015 (1998). https://pith.science/paper/3R4PQ33T
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The paper

The paper claims

Cluster counts can be compressed into one fitted exponent that tells dark energy apart from a cosmological constant.

The reading

Rich galaxy clusters are the largest gravitationally bound objects in the universe, so their number as a function of mass and redshift tracks the amplitude of the mass power spectrum. The paper's aim is to turn that fact into a single usable formula: the observed cluster abundance fixes the combination $0.5$ at the level of $0.5$ in the combination $0.5$, more precisely $0.5$, written as $0.5$, where the exponent $0.5$ is model-dependent. Wang and Steinhardt work out what $0.5$ actually is for cold dark matter mixed with either a cosmological constant or quintessence — a dynamical, slowly evolving negative-pressure component — and fit it as a function of the dark-energy equation of state $0.5$, the matter density $0.5$, the spectral index $0.5$ and the Hubble constant $0.5$. The payoff is that cluster counts stop being only a measurement of $0.5$ and become a constraint on whether the dark energy evolves. They then show that the change in cluster abundance between redshift zero and one differs by up to two orders of magnitude across models that a cosmic microwave background experiment alone cannot separate.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the exponent $0.5$ in $0.5$. It is not derived in closed form but assembled from three pieces: the virial overdensity $0.5$ at collapse, computed by evolving a spherical overdensity in a background with constant $0.5$ and fitted as $0.5$; the linear growth index $0.5$, obtained from a series expansion of the growth equation in $0.5$ and giving $0.5$ for a cosmological constant and $0.5$ for an open universe; and the Press-Schechter temperature function integrated over the redshift at which each cluster virializes, with a merger correction averaged over two published estimates. The second key object is the evolution index $0.5$, the slope of $0.5$ versus redshift over $0.5$, which the paper proposes as the discriminator that survives when the microwave background cannot distinguish the models.

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Core claim

The central result is a two-line fitting formula. For flat cold dark matter models with either a cosmological constant or quintessence, the cluster abundance requires $0.5$ with $0.5$ where $0.5$ collects the tilt and Hubble-constant dependence, $0.5$; for open models the corresponding exponent is $0.5$. Because $0.5$ enters with a coefficient of $-0.22$, a dark-energy component that is not exactly a cosmological constant shifts the required amplitude of density fluctuations in a way that is separable from a change in $0.5$ or $0.5$ over the range the authors consider. The paper also supplies the machinery behind the fit: a mass-temperature relation for a virialized cluster that accounts for the (non-clustering) dark-energy density, a growth index $0.5$ that reproduces the numerical growth factor to better than one percent for $0.5$ between zero and $0.8$, and a redshift-integrated Press-Schechter count rather than a single-epoch evaluation. Combining the resulting band with COBE normalization leaves a family of acceptable models at each $0.5$, and the paper identifies which ones sit in the overlap.

Load-bearing premise

The whole derivation assumes the quintessence field does not clump on scales smaller than about 100 Mpc, so that its only influence on a cluster is through the background expansion rate; the paper states this and cites a companion study still in preparation, and the entire dependence of $0.5$ on $0.5$ rests on it.

Editorial extensions

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  • Any flat dark-energy model with constant or slowly varying equation of state has its required $0.5$ fixed by $0.5$, $0.5$, $0.5$ and $0.5$ through Eq. (19), so cluster counts become a constraint on the dark energy rather than only on the matter density.
  • Models that produce identical microwave background power spectra still differ in the predicted slope of cluster abundance versus redshift, with the paper's worked examples spanning roughly two orders of magnitude in abundance at $0.5$.
  • If the evolution index $0.5$ can be measured to better than about $0.5$, cluster evolution becomes a practical way to separate quintessence from a cosmological constant and to pin down $0.5$ and $0.5$.
  • The reanalysis argues that earlier normalizations were biased high by up to about ten percent, because most groups evaluated the mass-temperature relation only at redshift zero instead of integrating over the virialization epoch.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The same fitting-formula approach could be inverted: given a future cluster survey that measures $0.5$ and its evolution precisely, Eq. (19) becomes a direct estimator of $0.5$ at low redshift, competitive with supernova distance measurements and statistically independent of them.
  • Because the exponent depends on $0.5$ only through the combination $0.5$, the cluster constraint alone cannot break the tilt-Hubble degeneracy; it needs an independent $0.5$ or $0.5$ measurement, which is worth stating explicitly when comparing cluster bounds to other probes.
  • If the dark energy does turn out to cluster at cluster scales, the failure mode is not random: it would show up as a systematic mismatch between the low-redshift normalization and the high-redshift evolution slope, which is a checkable signature rather than a silent bias.
Original abstract

The abundance of rich clusters is a strong constraint on the mass power spectrum. The current constraint can be expressed in the form $\sigma_8 \Omega_m^{\gamma} = 0.5 \pm 0.1$ where $\sigma_8$ is the $rms$ mass fluctuation on 8 $h^{-1}$ Mpc scales, $\Omega_m$ is the ratio of matter density to the critical density, and $\gamma$ is model-dependent. In this paper, we determine a general expression for $\gamma$ that applies to any models with a mixture of cold dark matter plus cosmological constant or quintessence (a time-evolving, spatially-inhomogeneous component with negative pressure) including dependence on the spectral index $n$, the Hubble constant $h$, and the equation-of-state of the quintessence component $w$. The cluster constraint is combined with COBE measurements to identify a spectrum of best-fitting models. The constraint from the evolution of rich clusters is also discussed.

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The abundance of rich clusters is a strong constraint on the mass power spectrum. The current constraint can be expressed in the form $\sigma_8 \Omega_m^{\gamma} = 0.5 \pm 0.1$ where $\sigma_8$ is the $rms$ mass fluctuation on 8 $h^{-1}$ Mpc scales, $\Omega_m$ is the ratio of matter density to the critical density, and $\gamma$ is model-dependent. In this paper, we determine a general expression for $\gamma$ that applies to any models with a mixture of cold dark matter plus cosmological constant or quintessence (a time-evolving, spatially-inhomogeneous component with negative pressure) including dependence on the spectral index $n$, the Hubble constant $h$, and the equation-of-state of the quintessence component $w$. The cluster constraint is combined with COBE measurements to identify a spectrum of best-fitting models. The constraint from the evolution of rich clusters is also discussed.

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s1 The current constraint can be expressed in the form $\sigma_8 \Omega_m^{\gamma} = 0.5 \pm 0.1$ where $\sigma_8$ is the $rms$ mass fluctuation on 8 $h^{-1}$ Mpc scales, $\Omega_m$ is the ratio of matter density to the critical density, and $\gamma$ is model-dependent. background 0.90 0.12 0.11 asserted 1.00
s2 In this paper, we determine a general expression for $\gamma$ that applies to any models with a mixture of cold dark matter plus cosmological constant or quintessence (a time-evolving, spatially-inhomogeneous component with negative pressure) including dependence on the spectral index $n$, the Hubble constant $h$, and the equation-of-state of the quintessence component $w$. contribution 0.97 0.95 0.21 asserted 1.00
s3 The cluster constraint is combined with COBE measurements to identify a spectrum of best-fitting models. method 0.65 0.88 0.19 asserted 1.00
s4 The constraint from the evolution of rich clusters is also discussed. contribution 0.90 0.53 0.04 unclear 0.52

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Figure 1. — The evolution index of cluster abundance for six mod
Figure 2. — COBE-normalized σ8 as a function of ΩQ for six constant w models with ns = 1 and h = 0.65. They are (from top to bottom): (1) w = −1; (2) w = −2/3; (3) w = −1/2; (4) w = −1/3; (5) w = −1/6; (6) w = 0. The highlighted regions indicate where the x-ray cluster abundance constraints imposed by Eq. (18) overlap the COBE constraint. Best-fit models correspond to the overlap region
Figure 3. — Cosmic microwave background (CMB) anisotropy meas
Figure 4. — The evolution of cluster abundance may break down th

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  • (B11) of [ref] .] γ_smooth = 3(1-w)/5-6w + 3 (1-w) (2-3w) /2 (5 - 6 w)^2 (5 - 12 w) Ω_Q + O(Ω_Q^2) ≃0.545 + 0.007 Ω_Q + (1+w) ( 0.025 + 0.005 Ω_Q ) + … , where in the second line we have expanded as well with respect to $1+w$.

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  • To do so, we use the recipe by [ref] and [ref] .

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  • A simple phenomenological model to quantify such a deviation has been suggested by Linder [ref] (see also Wang & Steinhardt [ref] ), parameterising the growth of linear density perturbations as [equation] where $δ$ is the fractional density fluctuation and $a$ is the scale factor; this approximation typically holds to a precision of $∼0.1%$.

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    Tidal virialization of dark matter haloes with clustering dark energy · Introduction · 0.82

  • Since the qualitative evolution of the radius and peculiar velocity does not change with respect to the $Λ$CDM model, we limit the discussion to the redshift evolution of $Δ_vir$ and compare the standard results obtained by using the prescription by [ref] at the virialization time $z_vir$ with those of [ref] and [ref] .

    Halo collapse: virialization by shear and rotation in dynamical dark-energy models. Effects on weak-lensing peaks · Evolution of the virial overdensity in smooth dark-energy models · 0.95

  • This contrasts with the conventional approximation for $f(a)$ [ref] given by

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