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Extending the Velocity-dependent One-scale String Evolution Model

High Energy Physics - Phenomenology · Submitted 30 Mar 2000 · 27 references

Pith's verdict: A solid methods paper that does what it claims analytically, but its headline accuracy claim and one figure caption need fixing before it's citable.

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The paper

The paper claims

Cosmic string networks may need only one adjustable parameter, not two, once a new momentum formula and radiation backreaction are included.

The reading

Cosmic strings are hypothetical one-dimensional defects left over from early-universe phase transitions, and their large-scale behaviour is often modelled by the velocity-dependent one-scale (VOS) model: two averaged equations for a correlation length $L$ and an rms velocity $v$, with a loop-chopping efficiency $�tilde c$ and a momentum parameter $k$. This paper asks whether the model can be made predictive with only one free parameter by replacing the previously free $k$ with a physically motivated function $k(v)$ and by adding energy loss from radiation backreaction. It then works out the resulting scaling solutions in radiation, matter, curvature, and cosmological-constant domination, and argues that the extended model captures the large-scale network properties when compared with simulations; the detailed comparison is reported in a companion paper. If that is right, analytic predictions for cosmic-string networks lose an adjustable knob and become more reliable across cosmic history, including the matter-radiation transition where the network is not scaling.

What carries the argument

The carrying object is the two-equation VOS model: $2�,dL/dt=2HL(1+v_�infty^2)+L v_�infty^2/�ell_f+�tilde c v_�infty$ in the flat case, and $dv_�infty/dt=(1-v_�infty^2)[k/L-(2H+1/�ell_f)v_�infty]$, with $k$ no longer a free function but the ansatz $k(v)=�frac{2�sqrt2}{�pi}(1-v^2)(1+2�sqrt2 v^3)�frac{1-8v^6}{1+8v^6}$. The ansatz is built to reproduce the relativistic limit $k_{�rm rel}=�frac{2�sqrt2}{�pi}�frac{1-8v^6}{1+8v^6}$ and the non-relativistic limit $k_{�rm nr}=�frac{2�sqrt2}{�pi}(1-v^2)$. Backreaction adds $8�Sigma v_�infty^6$ to the right-hand side of the $L$ equation, with $�Sigma=�tilde�Gamma G�mu$ for local strings and $�Sigma=�tilde�Gamma/[2�pi�ln(t/�delta)]$ for global strings; this shifts the scaling solution by $�Delta=8�beta v_0^5�Sigma$ and, for large $�Sigma$, gives $�gamma�propto�Sigma^{1/7}$ and $v�propto�Sigma^{-1/7}$.

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Core claim

The central claim is that the VOS model, with $k$ fixed by Eq. (3.9) and with a radiation-backreaction term added to the $L$ equation, describes the large-scale features of cosmic-string networks using only the loop-chopping efficiency $�tilde c=0.23�pm0.04$. The paper derives the two endpoints of $k(v)$—$k(1/�sqrt2)=0$ and $k_{�rm nr}=2�sqrt2/�pi$—and supplies an interpolating formula; it then shows that scale-invariant attractors still exist with backreaction, though their scaling values shift, and it gives the scaling solutions for power-law FRW backgrounds and for curvature-dominated open universes. The authors also report that the low densities seen in global-string simulations can be accommodated by a backreaction parameter $�Sigma_{�rm ax-sim}�approx3$, while cautioning that cosmological global strings have much larger $�ln(t/�delta)$ and therefore much smaller backreaction.

Load-bearing premise

The load-bearing premise is that the interpolating formula for the momentum parameter in Eq. (3.9), which joins the two derived limits, is correct at intermediate velocities; the paper fixes that bridge by fitting and defers the decisive high-resolution simulation check to a companion paper.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • A realistic GUT-scale string network is not scale-invariant from just before matter-radiation equality to the present, so predictions that assume pure scaling during that interval can be biased.
  • Electroweak-scale strings can remain friction-dominated until about three orders of magnitude after equality; for $�Omega_m=0.2,�Omega_�Lambda=0.8$ they are always non-relativistic today, which matters for superconducting-string and vorton studies.
  • A cosmological-constant-dominated future makes the network freeze out and be conformally stretched, with $L�propto a$ and $v_�infty�propto a^{-1}$, lowering density and velocity and affecting large-angle CMB anisotropies.
  • In an open, curvature-dominated universe the asymptotic solution is $L=At(�ln t)^{1/2}$ and $v_�infty=B(�ln t)^{-1/2}$, so the network is not scale-invariant and retains a record of when curvature domination began.
  • The global-string simulation densities $�zeta_{�rm rad}=0.9�pm0.1$ and $�zeta_{�rm mat}=0.5�pm0.1$ are consistent with the extended model for $�Sigma_{�rm ax-sim}�approx3$, but the same formula predicts much weaker backreaction for cosmological GUT-scale global strings.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If the one-parameter claim holds, a systematic drift in the fitted $�tilde c$ across radiation, matter, and transition simulations would be a clean diagnostic that the model is missing small-scale physics; conversely, a constant $�tilde c$ would support the idea that $k(v)$ absorbs the relevant small-scale effects.
  • The same $v^6$ power appears in the $k$ ansatz and in the backreaction term; a wiggly-string derivation could test whether both are symptoms of one underlying small-scale structure parameter, which the paper explicitly leaves open.
  • For CMB and structure-formation work, the non-scaling interval around equality suggests that bolting a scaling network onto a cosmological perturbation code is insufficient; one should integrate the VOS equations through the transition.
  • The large-$�Sigma$ regime seen in small global-string simulations could serve as a calibration target for simulation systematics, but extrapolating it to $�ln(t/�delta)�sim100$ should be treated as a separate cosmological calculation.
Original abstract

We provide a general overview of the velocity-dependent one-scale model for cosmic string evolution and discuss two further extensions to it. We introduce and justify a new ansatz for the momentum parameter $k$, and also incorporate the effect of radiation backreaction. We thus discuss the evolution of the basic large-scale features of cosmic string networks in all relevant cosmological scenarios, concentrating in particular on the `scaling' solutions relevant for each case. In a companion paper, we show, by comparing with numerical simulations, that this model provides an accurate description of the large-scale features of cosmic string networks.

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The abstract, sentence by sentence

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We provide a general overview of the velocity-dependent one-scale model for cosmic string evolution and discuss two further extensions to it. We introduce and justify a new ansatz for the momentum parameter $k$, and also incorporate the effect of radiation backreaction. We thus discuss the evolution of the basic large-scale features of cosmic string networks in all relevant cosmological scenarios, concentrating in particular on the `scaling' solutions relevant for each case. In a companion paper, we show, by comparing with numerical simulations, that this model provides an accurate description of the large-scale features of cosmic string networks.

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s0 We provide a general overview of the velocity-dependent one-scale model for cosmic string evolution and discuss two further extensions to it. contribution 0.77 0.80 0.08 asserted 0.92
s1 We introduce and justify a new ansatz for the momentum parameter $k$, and also incorporate the effect of radiation backreaction. contribution 0.95 0.95 0.09 asserted 0.99
s2 We thus discuss the evolution of the basic large-scale features of cosmic string networks in all relevant cosmological scenarios, concentrating in particular on the `scaling' solutions relevant for each case. contribution 0.91 0.80 0.16 asserted 0.75
s3 In a companion paper, we show, by comparing with numerical simulations, that this model provides an accurate description of the large-scale features of cosmic string networks. future work 0.38 0.73 0.24 asserted 1.00

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Figure 1. FIG. 1. The complete cosmological history of a GUT-scale cos
Figure 2. FIG. 2. Same as Fig. 1, but for an electroweak-scale cosmic st
Figure 3. FIG. 3. A close-upof Fig. 1, showing the recent evolution of t
Figure 4. FIG. 4. Testing the
Figure 5. FIG. 5. Comparing our full ansatz for the momentum parameter
Figure 6. FIG. 6. The effect of gravitational back-reaction on the appr

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146 later papers cite it

Evidence: some. 124 of the citing papers share no author with it, and 68 of those carry a confident label from Pith's citation classifier.

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137 arXiv papers cite this in 297 sentences

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Contests it 1 paper
  • Our larger simulations do not appear to follow a spiral approach close to the fixed point as predicted by the two-parameter VOS model of [ref] , and our new value for the fixed point velocity is about $5%$ lower than the model predicts, using 4k simulations [ref] .

    Scaling density of axion strings in terasite simulations · Discussion and conclusions · contest 0.74

Builds on it 6 papers
Uses its method or tool 47 papers
Uses its data or values 23 papers
  • The last term accounts for energy loss into loops with $c̃$ the efficiency of chopping loops from the network, and found numerically to be $c̃ ≃0.23$ [ref] .

    Gravitational waves from cosmic superstrings and gauge strings · Dynamics of long strings and loops · 1.00

  • Nambu-Goto simulations are well described by $=0.23$ and a momentum parameter of the form [ref] [equation] see Ref. [ref] for the latest calibration of these parameters from the simulation of Abelian-Higgs cosmic strings.

    CMB anisotropies generated by cosmic string loops · Cosmic string network evolution and loop production · 0.91

  • We fix $c̅ = 0.23$ based on numerical simulations [ref] , and we use the ansatz of Ref. [ref] for the function $k()$: [equation] In terms of $ξ$ and $$, the energy density $ρ_L$ of the long string network is ρ_L = μ/(ξ t)^2 , while the rate of energy loss needed to maintain scaling is dρ_L/dt = c̅ ρ_L/(ξ t) .

    Probing the pre-BBN universe with gravitational waves from cosmic strings · Cosmic string scaling and loop production · 0.89

Compares with it 3 papers
  • We wish to compare the standard VOS model [ref] and the model with distinguished $v_(2)$, $v_(4)$ and $v_(6)$.

    Generalised velocity-dependent one-scale model for current-carrying strings · $⟨Ẋ^4⟩$ and $⟨Ẋ^2⟩^2$ differences for standard VOS model · 0.99

  • The bounds derived for the root-mean squared string velocity can be compared to theoretical expectations from recent high-resolution simulations of Nambu–Goto and Abelian–Higgs string networks, which predict velocities in the range $v_s ∼0.3$–$0.6$ during both the radiation- and matter-dominated eras [ref] .

    Cosmic Strings as Dynamical Dark Energy: Novel Constraints · Constraints on Model 2: Positive energy, velocity-dependent string network. · 0.98

  • If one assumes a curvature parameter $k_m$ of order unity as in the case of Goto-Nambu strings [ref] , our estimated velocities are comparable to (though possibly somewhat lower than) the ones typically encountered in other field theory defect simulations [ref] .

    Evolution of Semilocal String Networks: I. Large-scale Properties · Simulation results and comparison to analytic models · 0.90

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