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Confronting the primordial black hole scenario with the gravitational-wave events detected by LIGO-Virgo

Cosmology and Nongalactic Astrophysics · Submitted 26 Aug 2021 · 83 references

Pith's verdict: A competent GWTC-3 update to the PBH population fit, with a useful event-by-event rate table, but the fit assumes every LIGO-Virgo binary is primordial and never says so.

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CitationChen Yuan, Qing-Guo Huang, Zu-Cheng Chen. "Confronting the primordial black hole scenario with the gravitational-wave events detected by LIGO-Virgo." arXiv:2108.11740 (2021). https://pith.science/paper/JXC6ASH4
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The authors reconstruct the mass distribution of primordial black holes directly from the LIGO-Virgo catalog, argue that the result matches a broad, red-tilted spectrum of curvature perturbations, and use the same distribution to test which

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The paper asks a single question of the LIGO-Virgo catalog: could the black holes it has detected be primordial, that is, formed in the very early universe from collapsing overdense regions rather than from dying stars? Rather than assuming a specific shape for the primordial mass distribution, the authors divide the range $1$–$130M_⊙$ into five bins, leave four of the bin heights free, and fit them together with the primordial fraction $f_{PBH}$ to the GWTC-3 events using a hierarchical Bayesian likelihood. The fit returns a distribution that falls steadily with mass, with a bump near $1M_⊙$, and a primordial fraction of a few times $10^{-3}$ of the dark matter. The authors then show that a broad, slightly red-tilted curvature power spectrum, $P_R(k) = A(k/k_{min})^{α}$ over $k_{min}=3.2×10^5,Mpc^{-1}$ to $k_{max}=9.5×10^6,Mpc^{-1}$, reproduces that shape once the softening of the equation of state at the QCD phase transition is included. With the mass function fixed, they compare the predicted merger rate of primordial binaries event by event against the rates LIGO-Virgo quotes, and find that GW190521 sits comfortably inside the primordial prediction while the four events with a component below $3M_⊙$ fall one to two orders of magnitude short.

What carries the argument

Three pieces carry the argument. First, the binned mass function of Eq. (1), a step function on five mass intervals normalised to unity, which lets the data choose the shape instead of a parametric form. Second, the primordial binary merger rate of Eq. (2), $R_{12}(t) ≈ 2.8×10^6,(t/t_0)^{-34/37} f_{PBH}^2(0.7f_{PBH}^2+σ_{eq}^2)^{-21/74}×…$, which converts a mass function and a dark-matter fraction into a comoving merger rate and is what makes the event-by-event comparison in Table I possible. Third, the mapping from a curvature power spectrum to a mass function: Press-Schechter integration of a Gaussian density-contrast PDF above a threshold $δ_c ≈ 0.45$, the critical-collapse relation $m = M_Hκ(δ_m-δ_c)^{γ}$ with $κ=3.3$, $γ=0.36$, the non-linear relation $δ_m = δ_ζ - 3δ_ζ^2/8$, and a QCD-era equation of state that lowers $δ_c$ and so raises the abundance near $1M_⊙$. The same power spectrum is then fed into the standard second-order kernel of Eq. (17) to produce the scalar-induced gravitational-wave spectrum, which is why the background prediction is not an add-on but a consequence of the fit.

Extended reading notes

Core claim

The central claim is that the binary black hole mass distribution inferred from GWTC-3 is compatible with a purely primordial origin, and that this distribution has a physical explanation in a broad red-tilted spectrum of curvature perturbations. The reconstruction is deliberately shape-agnostic: five mass bins between $1M_⊙$ and $130M_⊙$, four free heights, plus $f_{PBH}$, fitted with the inhomogeneous-Poisson likelihood of Eq. (3) using the primordial binary merger rate of Eq. (2). Case I (events with non-vanishing effective spin discarded) gives $P_1 = 1.5^{+0.6}_{-0.7}×10^{-1},M_⊙^{-1}$, $P_2 = 2.5^{+1.8}_{-1.1}×10^{-2},M_⊙^{-1}$, $P_3 = 1.4^{+0.4}_{-0.3}×10^{-2},M_⊙^{-1}$, $P_4 = 2.0^{+0.9}_{-0.7}×10^{-3},M_⊙^{-1}$ and $f_{PBH} = 2.9^{+0.7}_{-0.6}×10^{-3}$; case II gives similar values with $f_{PBH} = 3.4^{+0.7}_{-0.5}×10^{-3}$. Feeding that shape through a Press-Schechter calculation with critical collapse, the non-linear density-curvature relation, and a QCD-era equation of state yields a broad red-tilted spectrum with $A = 0.004647$, $α = -0.1033$ (case I) that traces the reconstructed bins, including the enhancement near $1M_⊙$ produced by the QCD transition. The event-by-event comparison in Table I is the sharp end of the claim: GW190521's primordial rate, $0.12^{+0.11}_{-0.07},Gpc^{-3},yr^{-1}$, matches the LIGO-Virgo rate $0.13^{+0.30}_{-0.11}$, whereas GW190425, GW190814, GW200105 and GW200115 come out at $3.6$, $0.13$, $1.9$ and $6.3,Gpc^{-3},yr^{-1}$ against quoted rates of $460$, $7$, $16$ and $36$. The authors conclude that the light components in those four events are neutron stars or other compact objects, not primordial black holes, and that the same mass function predicts a stochastic background from primordial binaries plus inevitable scalar-induced gravitational waves, both within current limits and within reach of LISA, Taiji, TianQin, ET, CE, NEMO and FAST.

Load-bearing premise

The likelihood contains only the primordial binary merger rate and no astrophysical black hole component, so every GWTC-3 binary black hole retained in the sample is treated as primordial; if most of them formed from stellar collapse, the reconstructed bins are not a primordial mass function and the event-by-event rate comparisons lose their meaning.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • GW190521's primary mass, inside the pair-instability gap where stellar collapse is not expected to reach, is accounted for by a primordial binary merger without invoking a stellar channel.
  • The light companion in GW190814, GW190425, GW200105 and GW200115 is pushed toward a neutron-star or exotic-object interpretation, since the primordial rate for those masses is one to two orders of magnitude below the LIGO-Virgo rate.
  • The stochastic background from primordial binary coalescences, computed for both spin cases, should be measurable by ET, CE, NEMO, LISA, Taiji and TianQin while staying under the LIGO O3 limit.
  • The scalar-induced gravitational-wave signal tied to the same curvature spectrum falls in the nanohertz band, consistent with the NANOGrav 12.5-year data and within reach of FAST.
  • A single broad red-tilted curvature spectrum with $α ≈ -0.10$ and $A ≈ 0.0046$ links the dark-matter fraction, the binary mass function, and two independent gravitational-wave backgrounds.

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  • The analysis fits a primordial-only population; a mixed fit with an astrophysical binary black hole component would test whether the reconstructed bins survive, since a stellar sub-population peaking near $10M_⊙$ could mimic the falling shape the authors attribute to the curvature spectrum.
  • The QCD-transition enhancement near $1M_⊙$ is a genuine prediction rather than a fit: a future detector measuring the sub-solar mass function shape would either confirm the bump's location and width or show it is absent.
  • Because the same $P_R(k)$ fixes both the binary merger background and the scalar-induced background, a joint detection or non-detection across the LISA and pulsar-timing bands would over-constrain the two-parameter spectrum $(A, α)$ far more tightly than either band alone.
  • The event-level rate comparison depends on the quoted LIGO-Virgo rates, which for GW190425 carry a factor-of-two uncertainty; as those rate estimates tighten, the light-mass exclusion strengthens or weakens accordingly.
Original abstract

Adopting a binned method, we model-independently reconstruct the mass function of primordial black holes (PBHs) from GWTC-3 and find that such a PBH mass function can be explained by a broad red-tilted power spectrum of curvature perturbations. Even though GW190521 with component masses in upper mass gap $(m>65M_\odot)$ can be naturally interpreted in the PBH scenario, the events (including GW190814, GW190425, GW200105, and GW200115) with component masses in the light mass range $(m<3M_\odot)$ are quite unlikely to be explained by binary PBHs although there are no electromagnetic counterparts because the corresponding PBH merger rates are much smaller than those given by LIGO-Virgo. Furthermore, we predict that both the gravitational-wave (GW) background generated by the binary PBHs and the scalar-induced GWs accompanying the formation of PBHs should be detected by the ground-based and space-borne GW detectors and pulsar timing arrays in the future.

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Adopting a binned method, we model-independently reconstruct the mass function of primordial black holes (PBHs) from GWTC-3 and find that such a PBH mass function can be explained by a broad red-tilted power spectrum of curvature perturbations. Even though GW190521 with component masses in upper mass gap $(m>65M_\odot)$ can be naturally interpreted in the PBH scenario, the events (including GW190814, GW190425, GW200105, and GW200115) with component masses in the light mass range $(m<3M_\odot)$ are quite unlikely to be explained by binary PBHs although there are no electromagnetic counterparts because the corresponding PBH merger rates are much smaller than those given by LIGO-Virgo. Furthermore, we predict that both the gravitational-wave (GW) background generated by the binary PBHs and the scalar-induced GWs accompanying the formation of PBHs should be detected by the ground-based and space-borne GW detectors and pulsar timing arrays in the future.

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s1 Even though GW190521 with component masses in upper mass gap $(m>65M_\odot)$ can be naturally interpreted in the PBH scenario, the events (including GW190814, GW190425, GW200105, and GW200115) with component masses in the light mass range $(m<3M_\odot)$ are quite unlikely to be explained by binary PBHs although there are no electromagnetic counterparts because the corresponding PBH merger rates are much smaller than those given by LIGO-Virgo. result 0.79 0.64 0.38 asserted 0.78
s2 Furthermore, we predict that both the gravitational-wave (GW) background generated by the binary PBHs and the scalar-induced GWs accompanying the formation of PBHs should be detected by the ground-based and space-borne GW detectors and pulsar timing arrays in the future. result 0.43 0.70 0.16 asserted 0.58

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Figure 1. FIG. 1. The median values and the 90% credible intervals
Figure 2. FIG. 2. The GWB associated with PBHs. The blue (red) band corresponds to the GWB from the coalescences of binary

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